Thursday 11 June 2020

how ana felt about her brothers

Hello My fellow bloggers. This another blog post from ME this is a story on The Hungry Wave Its about a girl named Ana, she has 3 brothers and mum but she was complaing never mind please enjoy.

8 comments:

  1. hello lefine me paul i like your work about tsuanmi it is very intersting because the she hated her brother but her brother save her

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    1. thank you paul for this comment any advice I can use to update some of my posts or future posts? please remeber advice and nice comments

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  2. Hey it is me Jesse
    and I am here to tell you your blog post is amazing It is nice I like how you put in nice light colours

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    1. Thank you Jesse. I tried to make it like emotions. I'm glad you like it.

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  3. HI Lefine my name is Seralia i really really like your work. you did a great job. i like it.

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  4. Hi Lefine, My name is Ruta and I am a student from Waikowhai primary school. You have done an amazing description drawing about your 3 brothers. Maybe next time you could add more writing about your brothers and why you made a description about them. Well done overall and you can visit my blog http://wpsrutal.blogspot.com/

    Thank you for sharing your Fabulous learning!

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    1. Thank you Ruta for this comment. Thank you for the advice for writing and I will follow your adivce because, I might need it.

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