Thursday 5 March 2020

Alantis

Atlantis















Once upon a time there was a town {its name is rose} but it was  really down and they hated sea animals but one turtle was not happy with the way they had been treated by his ancestors so he rose up from the ocean and he …………………………………  FLOODED THE WHOLE TOWN!!!!!!
 But, he did not realise he had made a portal to an underwater party and all the sea creatures started to disappear  and whenever a sea animal disappeared he would shout,``Where are they!” and when he finally noticed the portal he went inside and when he went he found, aqua man! Aqua man was doing his best to fight off the water and the the turtle{turtles name is Jesse} and he felt bad but then he saw all the sea creatures having the best time of their lives and then the mermaid slapped him with her fin and she said, “Stop it he's here to protect us we need to go back to the ocean but aqua man got…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..,


HE GOT SHOT

But heeeeee


“HE'S ALIVE!!!!!!”,

 Shouted the turtle
“But who shot him asked the mermaid{name is brooklyn} and a Mysterious voice  said, “it was me”

Everyone looked at each other and behind them. To their surprise there was nobody there so where did that voice come from.
Their legs began to shake in fear.
Did something or someone come out of the portal? What made them worry the most was the voice was so dark and spooky. Were they just paranoid because Aquaman got shot, the town was flooded and a portal had appeared from nowhere.
At this point no one could be trusted.

“It wasn't me” said Jessie I'm so sweet and innocent
But that voice echoed and echoed then  Brooklyn shouted, “hey it”……..  “My brother!”






TBC

2 comments:

  1. hi Lefine im Tauni from may road school i like your really awesome atlantis its so itresting i like it and you did some great work!!!!!! keep up the good work Lefine by Tauni

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